The laws of physics acting on the world of Jai have actually been forever upended; its surface completely modified, and its inhabitants permanently altered, causing turmoil. Fearing heresy, the synthetically smart Gods that once ruled the galaxy ended up being the planets jailers.
Hunted by the Gods and Akavi, the disgraced angel, Yasira and Tiv must dig even more than ever in the past into the infuriating secrets of their fractured world in order to save– or maybe even destroy– their fading world.
Tiv Hunt, who once trusted these Gods entirely, spends her days helping the last remaining survivors of Jai. Everybody is defending their flexibility and they call out for drastic action from their saviour, Tivs girlfriend Yasira. Yasira has actually ended up being deeply ill, debilitated by her Outside exposure, and is hardly able to breathe, let alone lead a transformation.
1: Second Books Are Hard
They cautioned me! Everyone alerted me! When you write your very first novel you get to take your sweet time. When you compose the sequel youre under contract and you have to do it in a specific quantity of time. Its like having to learn your entire procedure over once again.
But I did it! I composed the book, and now here we are. Because thats the other thing about authors; we can do tough things.
When I completed writing The Outside, I was so in love with these characters and this setting, I was simply chomping at the bit to compose more. By the time I was really allowed to compose more? It took a lot of work to get that mojo back and I blew through a whole lot of deadlines in the procedure.
2: Revisions Will Save Your Ass
The Outside had just 2 point-of-view characters– Yasira, who carried the majority of the novel, and Akavi, who got enjoyable little “villains viewpoint” scenes once in a while. The Fallen expands its scope– not just to more viewpoints but to more moving parts typically. Yasira and Tiv have been signed up with by a group of seven good friends and oh my god why did I attempt to present 7 brand-new characters at the same time please do not do this to yourself. The climax of the book– Im going to try to state this without spoilers– has them collaborating a bunch of dramatic things that take place dramatically in a lot of places at the exact same time. This sort of broadened scope was important to what I was making with the book– its really much a book about collectivity, community, variety of methods towards a common goal. Also wow that was more moving parts than I could in fact keep in my head at a time.
Sure theyre irritating, and I d rather get everything right the first time, however it turns out you can actually have seven vague underdeveloped secondary characters in a first draft, and then you can go back systematically and add more things about each character in all the scenes theyre in and people will be like “oh, your secondary characters are captivating.”. You can have a last fight thats sort of a hurried sketch of the major things that occur, and then you can go back, in fact chart out what groups were included in each of those major things and what their objectives are, what major phases the entire operation goes through (including preparation), what each group is doing in each phase, and include method more little scenes with method more detail, appropriately. Obvious composing recommendations is obvious, but, like, its great!
3: Isolation Sucks, Actually
Im doing a lot much better now, by the method. But still truly anticipating the day when I can go out and have a picnic with people again.
I didnt mean to make isolation a style of the novel but, looking back at what I composed, its all over. Everyone in this book is at some level dealing with disconnection, loss, or seclusion. A lot of this wasnt even apparent to me until I completed composing, and then I did that thing authors do so typically, where I looked back at it and went, “Oh, thats what I was talking about,” and then blinked at myself with a suspicious expression.
I was composing about seclusion prior to it was cool * (* spoiler: its not cool) merely for health reasons– I started deal with The Fallen when I remained in a complicated life scenario and too stressed out to do a lot besides go to my day task and after that being in bed with a blanket over me. Of course the pandemic happened and now seclusion is everyones issue.
4: I Love Writing About Weird Buildings
It does not play a huge function in the novel, however theres one chapter where Tiv visits a museum and goes that the Gods designed, and I fucking loved writing that chapter. It came out quickly in a book where nearly nothing came out quickly. Give me a fictional area that was constructed to communicate an adequately uncommon experience and I will go wild developing its floorplan and writing what its like to move through it. I have no idea why I like this very specific thing.
5: Your Audiobook Narrator Is Going To Have To Actually Read This Shit Aloud
Ada Hoffmann is the author of the science fiction unique The Outside, in addition to dozens of speculative narratives and poems. Adas work has actually been a finalist for the Philip K. Dick Award, the Compton Crook Award, and the WSFA Small Press Award, to name a few. She is also the author of the Autistic Book Party evaluation series, committed to thorough #ownvoices discussions of autism representation in speculative fiction. Ada is an adjunct teacher of computer science, along with a former semi-professional soprano, tabletop video gaming lover, and LARPer. She resides in eastern Ontario.
Sorry, Nancy! Im sure whatever youve developed will be great.
But feel in ones bones that the bewildered voice actor whos trying to narrate the audiobook version will eventually call you on Zoom and resemble “wait what is going on here? How do you desire this read? Who is even talking in what part of this, exactly?” and you wont have anything to state except “lol idk, good luck with that.”
Composing a complex telepathic discussion with a hive mind? Want to simply splash expressions all over the page like a speculative poem to communicate a multiplicity of contrasting however collaborative viewpoints within the same entity? Sure, go nuts, youre currently under contract for this book and you can do what you want.
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It does not play a big function in the novel, however theres one chapter where Tiv goes and checks out a museum that the Gods designed, and I fucking loved composing that chapter. Provide me an imaginary area that was constructed to communicate a sufficiently uncommon experience and I will go wild developing its floorplan and writing what its like to move through it.
When I ended up writing The Outside, I was so in love with these characters and this setting, I was simply chomping at the bit to write more. I wrote the book, and now here we are. A lot of this wasnt even obvious to me up until I ended up writing, and then I did that thing authors do so frequently, where I looked back at it and went, “Oh, thats what I was talking about,” and then blinked at myself with a suspicious expression.